Chapter5-Pg5

09 Dec 2008 12:34 am

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Author's Comments:

farah

Help? I am still confused either to use singular or plural nouns for action words in comics. O_O

09 Dec 2008 01:01 am

Reader's Comments:

Manga-Ka

Well, I think you should do what ever you like the most ^^
By the way.. WOOT! New Page! >w<
Hm.. He seems like he's back to normal >x'D and she's the only one that remember what's happened at the party, it's just one of the many things he dosen't remember.. .__.' Poor Daniel.. >__>' x'D

Posted: 09 Dec 2008 11:06 am

Sara (Guest)

This page looks so good! I love the last two panels for Daniel and Flora's expressions, and the first 3 for how they convey the actions -and- emotions in a cute way. I just love your style.

I say use singular action words. It's what I typically see.

~Sara

Posted: 11 Dec 2008 09:15 am

rakka981

okay So he still doesn't fully remember her.

Posted: 12 Dec 2008 03:56 am

farah

Replies Manga-Ka, yeah. I sympathize with him too. First, his entire early memories, now this!! :P

Sara, thanks. I really enjoyed working on this page. :3

Rakka, yep enviously. Btw, haven't seen you in a while. ;)

Posted: 17 Dec 2008 08:51 pm

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